Technique

The way I write…
I brainstorm twenty titles
words or phrases
that sound good to me
that subconsciously
already feel like parts of me
then I refine them
and refine them
pile them up around my feet

And when I’m in the mood to write
I’ll either start writing
(with aim or aimlessly)
until I get stuck
then I grab a title
work it in the lock
release whatever’s hidden
(and it feels good)

Or I choose a title
poking from the ground
reach for my shovel pen
and begin the excavating
find the poem that’s buried beneath
(and it feels good)

Those phrases, those titles
feel like friends I haven’t met yet
that sense you get
when crossing paths with someone
and feel you already know them
or that there’s a story between the two of you
and you just hope that it gets told

The stories we got to tell
are ripe for poems
and the stories that slipped through our hands
can be riper, can be richer sometimes

So, I’ll begin
gathering my titles
and choose one for you…

[2019]

Thanks for reading.

Listen to my poems on Soundcloud
Follow me on Twitter
Follow me on Instagram
Buy my book on Amazon

Published by

Tom

Teach yourself to learn.

7 thoughts on “Technique”

      1. Well, I’m not sure about that 🤔😁

        I really just write what comes into my head at the time and try not to edit too much if I’m honest.

        Sometimes I can write 10 – 15 ‘poems’ in a row, but it’s mostly just one or two a day nowadays.

        Sometimes it’s titles first and sometimes it’s the words first. Just depends on the words that come.

        I draw a lot from personal experience, and reference some pretty tricky subjects, so I tend to leave them in drafts for a while, then have a quick tidy up before posting.

        Inspiration wise it can be anything really, but there’s always a lyric or a musical influence in there somewhere.

        It was refreshing to read this one from you – it certainly describes a very similar process to my own.

        I look forward to more 🖤🖤

        Liked by 1 person

      2. I thought there must be a musical inspiration going on there somewhere. Perhaps your lyrically inspired username…. Short and sweet/bitter poems with a punch. Your technique is certainly working for you anyway. I wish I could write as succinctly as you.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. It’s interesting isn’t it?

        I’m envious of your lyrical, whimsical, flowing style. I just don’t have the ability to write poetry like that.

        I guess on some level we all want what we don’t have 🤔😊🖤

        Liked by 1 person

      4. Haha, that sounds about right. I think it’s probably a good sign that we’re ambitious and wanting to continually improve or grow… Or, at least, that’s what I’ll choose to believe 😉

        Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s