
I’m driving in heavy rain
I am on my way
As thick as fog
this heavy rain
and I can’t see
I can’t see
I am driving in heavy rain
Part of me wishes
part of me aches
part of me wants to make a mistake
I am driving in heavy rain
I am on my way
There is an urgency in my blood
There is an urgency
in my blood
to spill
Driving in heavy rain
Eighty miles an hour
in heavy rain
Eighty miles an hour
for hours
A mistake
a mistake
I make
a mistake…
[2010]
Thanks for reading.
Wow, this is intense Tom 👏
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Ah, thanks Bree. I thought I’d go back and dig out some older poems to offer some comparison between my early stuff and new stuff. It’s fair to say, the old stuff is much bleaker!
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Such a great idea. I’m really enjoying it.
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