
Quiet, quiet
calm and still
closed eyes can rest
sleepy head can drift
Quiet, quiet
gentle thought
no more mess to address
no more questions to molest you
Finally cut free
spill out, drift on
into a new sea
palms laid on fresh skin
Fretted for years
worried for a living
guilt; it breaks your heart
the quietest of all
let it go, let go
they’ll never know
Reborn, reborn
the duty is renewed
don’t ruin, don’t wreck
just hush your wondering
Quiet, quiet
free from white noise
no more hate to abate
no betrayal to wade through
Let your senses roam
let your hope bloom
no fray in the rope of love
you cling to, now
You’re free, you’re free
the creep can sleep
but must not repeat
don’t speak
just hush
little nightmare…
[2010]
Thanks for reading.
Ohhh this is lovely…soothing❤
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Ah thank you so much! Really pleased you enjoyed it and thanks for the follow.
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I read more of your poems …😉
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Thank you! and I will do likewise 🙂
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Beautiful but chilling… a sting in that tale.
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Thanks! 🙂 And absolutely… The mental gymnastics of trying to tame the darkness so you can sleep through those past transgressions…
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Brilliant.
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Thanks Bree! Another one I had to resist rewriting before re-sharing. Just got to let them go sometimes. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I don’t see what you’re seeing. I really like it. There’s a haunting self-soothing comfort to it.
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I read this fast, and I read it slowly. It works perfectly either way. Very Nice!
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That’s good to know Peter, seems like it bodes well. How is your audio recording going? I just bought a better microphone to encourage me to create some new ones. 🙂
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I recorded several versions but am still trying to convince myself that any one of them is worthy of posting.
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I’m sure they’re all great!
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Please post more of your poetry readings, Peter. I really enjoyed listening to your reading of ‘As we entangle’. More, please!
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I’ve done a few. They all have a category and tag of “The Spoken Word” so can be searched for that way.
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That’s my weekend entertainment sorted! Thanks, Peter.
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I’m still finding my feet, and voice, in recording my own, or others’ words. Just as we never see ourselves as others see us, we never hear ourselves as others do. Apparently it is all to do with how we hear ourselves through bone conduction and the ears, whereas we hear a recorded version just through the ears!
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Calm and chilling at the same time!
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That’s me 😉 Thanks for reading.
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..the quietest of all .. let go .. let go
Stirring piece ,, eco 🌿
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Thank you! Glad to hear it worked for you. 🙂
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