Too tired to rest
I only care
are you out there somewhere
A glass of cheap wine
on the arm of some expensive chair
And do you…
could you
think of me sometime
maybe…
while I’m still alive
The gravity of your movements
swells the tides of my emotions
and you’ll probably never know
You drag me to ecstasy
then to lowest ebb
and you’ll probably never know
You amaze me
with your vagary
I could fall in love so easily
but you won’t let me
Could you
think of me sometime
could you
think of me sometime
maybe…
while we’re still alive…
Thanks for reading.
The Lighthouse 
“You amaze me with your vagary, I could fall in love so easily, but you won’t let me.” Wow, this line made me feel sick a depth of emotions. I loved it. This is a beautiful poem.
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Such*
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Thank you so much. I wrote this some years ago and I meant every word a hundred times over
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It conveys such a deep longing, unrequited. I love it.
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What a wonderful, heartfelt poem. You read it so beautifully and the sound of the sea in the background gives it an added and important dimension.
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Thanks Chris, that’s kind of you to say. 🙂 I’m really glad you enjoyed this one. I vividly remember sitting on my bed writing it into my notebook and feeling pretty satisfied with it at the time.
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And so you should have been.
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“Could you
think of me sometime”…the repetition of this line is so brilliantly thought of…it makes the whole piece so heartfelt
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Ah thank you so much! Telepathically trying to convince someone to think of you does not work. This poem proved it to me 😉
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💕💕
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‘…I could fall in love so easily
but you won’t let me…’
Heartbreaking.
Loved it 🖤
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I am to break! 🙂 And thank you again… massively appreciated as always.
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You’re most welcome 🖤
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Congratulations Tom! I have nominated you for the LIEBSTER Award, please see my blog post under the same name for details! I look forward to reading your response to my questions upon acceptance of the award! 😃🙏💛👊🎉
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Ah ha! Wow, that’s very kind of you. I will have to gather my response and get it posted. I suspect it won’t be until next week though. Thanks so much for the nomination. Honoured. 🙂
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Your welcome mate! Well deserved! Congratulations and I look forward to reading your response to my questions upon acceptance of the award! 😀
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This is just so perfectly crafted x
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😉 Thank you!
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Terrific imagery, and that image to accompany is just perfect!
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Thank you Peter! Always great to see a comment from you. I’m glad you liked this one. It used to be my favourite of all the things I’d written and I didn’t think I’d better it. Thanks for reading.
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My pleasure Tom.
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What a beautiful & heartfelt poem…the emotions can be felt in your voice 💫
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Thanks Navin, that’s so kind of you to say. Thank you so much for reading, listening and commenting. I really appreciate it.
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You’re welcome Tom 💫
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