
Let me fan the flames
of your fandom
tickling ‘like’ and painting praise
watching out for typos
You and I
should duck
out of here
you and I
should get a room
What would we do in there
behind the locking door?
Turn two armchairs facing inwards
swap endless breathless monologues
clinging on to voices
hanging from each word
at what point would we be satisfied
at what point would we be done
Let’s assume
there’s a bed in that room
or an armchair
or a shower
at what point would we be satisfied
at what point would we feel like one
Afterwards, the peace glide
and searching open eyes
scanning for silent truths
for glimpses of emotion, for clues
at what point would we be satisfied
at what point would it feel enough
There’s an ocean of desire
between your pen and my paper
there’s an ocean of water
between your hem and my wrist
You and I
should duck
right out of here
you and I
need to get a room…
[2019]
Thanks for reading.
A deeply sensual read (and listen!) 👍🖤
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Glad you enjoyed 😉
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Absolutely 😊🖤
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Its passionate and sensual and the reading sealed the deal…
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Thanks! Glad it worked for you. Hope it satisfied 🙂
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You have a good lovely reading voice Tom
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Ah, thank you Luke. I don’t really know what I’m doing, but I’m enjoying the learning process.
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It sounds very professional with the reverb (not sure if that’s what it’s called) – need more of that format on here so keep it up 🙂
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Reverb, that’s the thing. I wish I could record them all really but I very rarely get any time to myself to get them down. Must try harder.
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Enjoyed both the poem and the audio!
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Really glad you enjoyed 😄
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This is fantastic 👏
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Thanks Bree, really glad you enjoyed! 🙏🏼😀
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grrreat!
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Thank you! 😀 And thanks for reading (as always).
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🙂
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Can’t believe it’s been a year!
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Time flies when you’re locked in a room!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Why have I never read this before???
This is brilliant x
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Aww thank you. Glad you enjoyed! 🙂
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More than enjoyed… 😈
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Haha, I do like to leave my listeners satisfied!
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😘
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If you need supplies let me know. You must need a glass of water………..or something, by now!
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Thanks Peter… I do hope these lovers made good use of room service…
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